Friday, August 14, 2020

Quick write

Hi guys here’s another quick write 


Hi my name is Brook and I am no ordinary kid. I suffer from a condition called eczema. I've had it since i was six but this is a story that happened to me one day. So I was six and was at the supermarket with my mum and my imaginary friend Tory so we were going down the lolly aisle so I ran down the aisle as fast as I could so I could get some lollies because I could read mum’s mind and she was thinking “ hhmm Brook has been very good this week so she can get a lolly so I grabbed a lolly and ate it because I was little back then and didn't know what to do with the lollie but then i started to get a real bad rash so mum took me straight to the doctors to see what that rash was. Turns out it was eczema so they gave mum some special creme to put on the eczema. When I got home I had to finish my homework which was soooo easy because it was only  learning shapes but anyway that's how I got my eczema. 


THE END 

Written by Eilish 

14.8.2020 


Tuesday, August 11, 2020

Quick write

 hi guys so we had 20 minutes to write a story with a t-rex a angry clown a yeti and the emergency services in the story so this is mine 


2000,00 years ago  there was a friendly t-rex called rexy. He was a lovely rex but one day he went for a walk in the dark forest and heard a loud stomping noise. It was coming from the darkest part of the forest. The noise kept getting louder and louder until rexy knew what  it was, a yeti with an Angry clown pennywise. They were after food but the food was rexy. Rexy ran as fast as a little t-rex can to the highest point on the hill and roared for his dinosaur friends to come and charge at the yeti and angry clown. But only 3 dinosaurs came but Rexy could only use what he had. so they all had a fight but then …… Rexy got a bad cut and passed out, then his friends saw him and came over to help but there's not much they could do except roar for help. so they all roared for help as loud as they all could then the ambulance people saw and got rexy to the dino hospital and gave rexy stitches. 3 months later rexy was all better and happy with his friends and going on lots of adventures in the dark forest. 


THE END 

Written by Eilish fraser 

24.7.2020 

  

letter to Jacinda Ardern

 hi guys so in may we had to write a letter to the New Zealand prime minister  Ms Jacinda Ardern.

this is my letter 


Room 4, Cana
St. Patrick’s Primary School,

Greymouth

28.5.2020


The Prime Minister of New Zealand

Dear Ms Jacinda Ardern (Prime Minister)


My name is Eilish Fraser, I am 11 years old from St Patrick's Primary School Greymouth. I would like you to know that I am so grateful to have you as my Prime Minister. You make

such good decisions for Aotearoa. You have kept us safe and brought us into level 2. 

It was my birthday on the 27th of May and my wish was to be back at school for my birthday to see my friends and you made that come true. I am very happy and thankful. 

I would like to share with you what I got up to in lockdown.  I went on heaps of bike rides, made a swing on the tree out the front of our house and I got a new trampoline for my birthday and we had to set that up. That was a big job!

Thank you for reading my letter!


Yours kindly

 Eilish Fraser, 


Thursday, August 6, 2020

hi guys this is what i got up to last Weekend here's my weekend story 

Eilish’s Weekend 


On Friday after school, Eilish went to the pool with heaps of her friends. She went on the hydro slides and raced her friends. Her favourite slide is Rapids the blue slide. She was there until 7:00pm.

 Then on Saturday she went to play netball at 11:00am at Anzac Park. She played Koro and her team won 17/7 and she got 13 of those goals and it was a very competitive game over all. 

At 4:00 she went to a youth group at the parish centre. She learnt how to be an Alter-server for the church. Then all the people at the youth group got to eat and drink. Then they played a game and tidied up the mess from the food. 

After youth group Eilish went to Monteiths for tea with her grandparents and their friends because every first week of the month they go and catch up with their friends. Then after that she went to her nana's house and got a hot chocolate, an ice block, and a biscuit. 




Then on Sunday she went to her friend’s house. Behind their house was a paddock with 12 sheep and 9 lambs. They were so cute. 

Then they went to the skate park for a bit and took their scooters and bikes. Then on the way home they got some lollies and then 1 hour and a half later she went home and then had her grandparents over for tea and dessert. Then she went to bed because she was sooooooo tired.

 

Written by Eilish Fraser 

3.8.2020