Wednesday, September 2, 2020

quick write

 


Hi this is my quick write 



One day in a very poor small  town lived a boy that  had no money so he had to steal food to eat. One day He had to go and steal a bread roll for his 78 year old grandma. She was very sick and is about to pass. But one day he had to go to the shop. when he got there there was a little homeless  baby laying on the mouldy wet ground with creepers crawling on it. The baby was laying by itself  So the boy went and picked the poor little baby up And took it home and bathed  it in the sink so it would be fresh and clean. But the Problem was that the boy didn't have any clean baby clothes for it to wear so he grabbed An old  rag and put it around the baby. The boy Named the baby Brooke  because he Thought she looks like a Brooke. But he had something very special about him could shape shift into anything he  wanted.He put the baby to sleep and he started carving a hei-tiki. But once he was almost done carving this random person came up behind him and put handcuffs on him and took him away. Very unexpectedly the boy was thinking who is this and what have I done wrong to be taken away. But the boy escaped the man or Woman and ran home  to check on baby brooke. 1 year later the boy and baby were in Good condition and were not poor anymore and they had an Amazing house so you could basically say they were rich. 


THE END 

WRITTEN BY EILISH  


1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Eilish, My Name is Charli from Mamaku 1 at Grey Main School. Great Story! I really like how you have put lots of thought into this story and used technical language. Keep up the great work I look forward to commenting on your blog next week.

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